Goosebumps- Escape from the Carnival of horrors- By R.L. Stein
Characters= Patty(female), Brad (Patty and Brad's best friends. ), Stark, A Huge man, Madame Zeno
Now let’s get start the Story-
Transition page- scene of playground
Patty:- “What do you want to do?”
Stark:- “I don’t know, Patty. What do you want to do?”
Patty:- “Not fair, Brad. I asked you first.”
Transition Page:- last week of August
(transition ascending appearance increase)- Patty likes being bossy. You don’t mind, though. It’s no big deal. It’s hard to win a fight with her anyway.
Patty:- “You’re so boring, Brad,” (Whenever Patty complains, her freckles really pop out. Now there are about a million wrinkles spread across her face.)
Patty suddenly bursts out:-“Hey! I know what we should do!” “Let’s bike over to Bennet’s Field and watch the carnival set up!”
Stark:- “Listen I don’t know,……………..It’s getting dark, and Mom said I have to be home by nine.”
Brad: -“It’s only a quick bike ride,” for stark- “Are you some kind of wimp?”
(Stark can’t believe it, it is because Brad has some kind of a wimp and he said for stark )
Stark- “Okay. Okay,'' But if it’s as bad as last year, there was nothing enough.”
(Patty took the lead command….. Brad pinch stark to join to go…)
Page transition---- it's dark by the time at Bennet’s Field. And all my friends dropped the bike in the grass and raced in the moonlit field.. the carnival was surrounded by a huge wooden fence.
Presentation of 5 sec-( after reaching the carnival entrance, you hear music coming from inside. But some really strange music)
Brad Action- Brad stretches his neck to try to peer over the fence
Patty action - Patty jiggles the padlock on the gate. It’s sealed shut.
Brad says - “I guess we’ll have to wait……… until tomorrow night,......... when the carnival opens,”
Patty says. “No way,” “Let’s climb the fence. Now”
Brad -“Are you crazy?” “We’ll get caught!”.
Patty- “Come on. There’s probably no one…….. in there,”
Page transition – all friends climb the fence to get entered` and they get entered
Stark action == stark glance at his watch. It’s almost 9:00 P.M.
Stark-- “Let’s do it!” ………. “Let’s climb the fence!”
Then all friends .. Patty, Brad and at last Stark got into the carnival by facing some difficulty, because there was no other to help him.
10. Transition page—(it was pretty dark — the only light comes from torches. At first the carnival looks the same as it always does.).
11. Carnival action--- — Dinky rides. Hot dog wagons. Then the lights start to flicker on in every corner of the field .. the rides start to move. It’s as if the whole place is magically coming to life.
Stark= “Hey! Look at that giant roller coaster!” (pointing up ahead) “ But, They never had a roller coaster before!”
Brad- “Yeah,”----- “And the whole place is a lot bigger……. than last year!”
Patty -“This is awesome!”
Patty– “Wow!” “It’s like a rocket to outer space!”
Stark=“this is the coolest ride I’ve ever seen!”. “They still have that dumb choo-choo train over
there,”
Stark pointed out,== “but we could ride……. we will see all night ….and never go near it!”
“Hey! Where are all those wooden booths from last year?” (but all are gone….)
12. Transition= in their place are giant video games and huge spinning wheels studded with hundreds of blinking colored lights
Brad suddenly cries out -“Look there!”.
Stark- “This is, uh — uh —”( Because a large hand has come down on your shoulder. Hard.)
Action - Stark slowly turns and gazes up at a huge
A huge man in a deep voice- “What are you doing?”....... “You’re not allowed in here,” Directly pointing to Stark
Stark- “We’re sorry,” hoping Stark appears sorry and not just scared. “We wanted to look around. That’s all. But we’ll leave. Right now.”
Action - His eyes stare into yours. He clamps both hands down on your shoulders and says,
Man- “You’re not going anywhere!”
Brad = “Wh-what do you mean?”
The man replies =“I just had an idea. A great idea,”. “I want, kids, to stay and try out the rides before the grand opening tomorrow.”
Action- Patty’s eyes open wide. And
Patty:- “Cool!”
Stark -“Are you sure it’s all right with the owner?”
The man said- “I’m Big Al, the manager. And what I say around here goes.”( And given three maps for visiting)
13. Transition page- (the map was distributed among the friends)
Patty exclaims =“A whole carnival to ourselves!”. “Where should we start?
Stark= “the map is in two-part”
“Let’s head for the midway and play some games!”
Stark, Patty, and Brad jog down a wide avenue. Tents of every color line the street
Stark said- “ I am going in”………. ”I will meet in a minute” and Entered the tent
1. Madame Zeno, sitting in the shadows(Appearance- She wears a long red dress dotted with brightly colored gems. They shimmer in the candlelight. Her black hair tumbles to her shoulders as she bends over a large crystal ball.)
Madame Zeno = “Welcome,” she whispers. Then she reaches out and gently lifts your hand. “Let me tell you your future.” She puts stark’s hand in her hand
“I see the horror in your future. In your immediate future,”
Stark stammer= “Wh-what kind of horror?” ….“What do you mean?”
Transition page= Madame Zeno releases Stark’s hand and spreads three different cards having the picture of 1. a headless man,2. a bloody sword,3. a large, evil eye
Action= two-colored cards – Red and Blue
Madame Zeno= “Turn one over,” she commands. “Learn your fate.”
(Stark chosen blue)
Transition page ( text page having massage = Help us! You are our only hope. Hurry to the back door of the freak show. Signed, The Freaks.)
Stark asks Madame Zeno- “What does this mean?”
Action= (She stares deep into your eyes. Her lips tremble. She leans forward. and She’s about to speak.)
Action transition= (Stark reaches out to take the card. And it bursts into red-hot flames! In seconds, the entire tent fills with thick smoke. Flames shoot across the floor. and Stark runs for the door.)
(Stark takes a deep breath of fresh air)
14. Action transition= (After some time there is nothing like a tent, everything has disappeared.)
Stark thinks= “ help someone that's a good one! …………the fire! the disappearing tent .. that’s all totally Cool! ……”
Starks wonder by thinking= “who has built up such awesome special effects.”
Stark says loudly- “Come one” ……” we have another way to escape from this place”
15. Transition page—-” all of them have seen carnival people like ghosts
Brad - “omg! they were dead people that’s why they are wearing old fashioned cloth” …” they are ghosts”.....” Rannnnnnnnnnn….. They are ghosts”
Patty- “ Run ! they are following us;”
stark= “friends ! only three minutes are left until midnight,”........... “The carnival people don’t want us to leave but we have to escape.”
Brad- “we can't let them catch us……friends let's hide friends.”
Stark- “ but where we will hide, we have already explored all the directions.”
Brad- “ See this gigantic canon, we all can fit in this”
16. Transition page- all friends reached canon
Patty- “Ouch! you are sitting on my hand !”
Brad- “ I don't have time to apologize.”
Stark- “ what is burning”,
17. Transition page– Boom…..An explosion occurs, and they fly out from the carnival
Brad- “You make it stark! “
Patty- “wow! we are out from this carnival of horror ”
Stark= “ congratulations ! ……….Now we will not go to any unknown place like this !.”
Transition page- happy landing they all escape from the carnival of horror.
The end
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